Ready for Review FS Special Forces groups.

[ImperialEevee]

Unit Name: FS Special Forces
Credits: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Mandalorian_Knights.
Consolidation Thread: NA.
Unit Description: These units sport dark gray armor with a T shaped visor that glows a bright blue. Underneath their armor is a layer of black blaster resistant clothing. The only capes they wear is that of other force sensitive users they kill.

ATTRIBUTES

• Armour: Average.
  • Gear: Durasteel armor, blaster resistant clothing layer.
• Speed: High.
• Melee: Extreme.
  • Weaponry: 1X white lightsaber.
• Ranged: NA.
  • Weaponry: NA.
• Morale: Average.
• Size: Low (4-12 members).
• Rarity: Semi-Unique (5).
  • Recruitment & Replenishment: This unit is replenished by specially cloned soldiers capable of using the force. A large batch of them is not mass produced because these troops tend to be free thinking renegades only loyal to each other.

Strengths:
1. Does use the force and lightsabers.
2. Thinks outside the boxes.
3. Loyal to each other.

Weaknesses
1. Rarely disobeys direct orders.
2. Seeks to be better than brothers.
3. Will create their own missions.

Historical Information:
Different squads clash peacefully against each other often. Two of these squads once infiltrated a cafeteria a went to war with the ten squads of regular infantry their using lunch trays as their weapons. The two squads, nine regular units, and half of the tenth unit ended up in the infirmary to check for minor wounds and bruises.

 

[Dreadheart]

@ImperialEevee MANDO KNIGHTS! -Cloned-. Thats spicy!

So, a few comments on the sub As usual xD

1. Blaster resistant clothing. I would like to see that specified, or, if so, made into a separate sub to grant the material some substance? It feels too vague given no material from legends or other subs is mentioned.

2. Lightsaber! I like that you explain the extreme rate by having lightsaber! NICE!

3. Recruitment: By SW EU cloning is a genetic process which fails to copy midichlorians being what makes force sensitives (weird lil thing that establishes connection to the force). Now, given that, I would like to see explained or mentioned the how cloning results to force sensitives. It could be by copying errors resulting to limited deviations of normal clones or high grade clones becoming force sensitives, or selecting any force sensitives from the clone batches? Or engineering already force sensitive people into genetically modified troops? A variety of explainations really, depending on what take you like most. Id suggest the first, judging by the overall clone-centric theme.

4. Behavior. I notice a contraddiction. You mention that the clones mainly tend to become free thinking renegades, which hints to rogue elements and independent bodies, within the HNRE, which is then strengthened by being loyal to each other in a squad level or a breed level (one such unit to another, though not to their superiors or a higher cause) and then contraddicted by Weaknesses in which they would rarely disobey orders, which in and of itself makes for a good soldier, so i would argue it wouldnt be a weakness.

If they are loyal to themselves, as in, their units/breed, then does that mean they are hard to control? Have they ever pulled any coup-like act in any scale? Is it possible to do? How does the HNRE control such elements?

5. In Historical Info, there is no real mention on how they came to be, how they operate, or how they are produced, while there is a peaceful brawling habbit that then ended up several in the medbay So, it feels these are harder to control, more aggressive or easy-to-taunt units, which can then mean that they are hot-blooded (perhaps a side effect of their force sensitive nature given they are clones?)

I would like to see further talk on below topics:
A> How did they start? Were they created to counter the force sensitive hordes deployed by jedi/sith/shasha etc? Or were they errors in the production that were managed so as to serve a purpose?
B> Have they participated in any events or battles worth of mention? Do they have any military history in their CV? Here might be a good opportunity to add events of internal issues, such as brawling, hot-blooded events and other occasions of violence of any level, and how they were repremanded or handled by the HNRE.
C> How are they structured? How do they operate in the dogma of their faction? How did they get the lightsaber tech and what kind of it do they use? Is it industrialized like the Zakuulan knights? Or do they have a religious background like sith/jedi did? How and where is their Force trainning based? Do they actually use the force or simply use teras kazi-styled methods to simply counter force sensitive enemies?