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Approved Darrian Transport ship.

Galactic Credits
ᖬ4,940
Silver
€3,495
Ship Name: Darrian Transport Ship.
Credits: https://shipsmonthly.com/news/the-worlds-largest-newly-built-wooden-cargo-ship/
Type: Seaship.
Purpose: A cargo ship.
Consolidation Thread: NA.
Architect: Confederate Unassociated Manufacturing Plants.
Description: This is a steam and sail powered ship with a ton of room to store soldiers and land ships. Its design is made so it can perform beach landings while staying fast, sleek vehicles. The four swivel guns are kept near the back of the ship with two on either side of the wheel of the boat. The ramp itself is set up right in front of the rooms where the land ships are stored with a wood barrier between it and the ramp. The wood barrier is sealed with tar. The ramp itself is powered by the steam engine and is activated by two levers being pulled backwards from inside the ship. The ramp applies pressure to the inside wood barrier, breaking the tar, sending forward the wood section. The tar of the front, angled part of the ship is then broken and falls down with the top of the ship being heavy.

ATTRIBUTES
  • Main Stats
    • Defence: Low.
      • Defensive Elements: wood hull coated in cheap aluminum alloy.
    • Offence: Low.
      • Offensive Elements: X4 4 pounder swivel cannons.
    • Durability: average.
    • Scarcity: Regional.
  • TvM Requirement: 5V1.

Strengths:
1. Very fast speed. Can easily evade enemy vessels.
2. Fast deployment of land ships/infantry.

Weaknesses:
1. Weak to any enemy cannons.
2. Weak to being rammed.

Historical Information:
This ship was designed during Carter, an engineer, trying not to get fired from his job. He had spilled coffee on a spot of his blue print and claimed it was only a slight mistake as the ship was designed to deliver soldiers on beaches without taking in water during regular travel. After two weeks of stalling he eventually delivered a completed blueprint. His rival engineer wanted to disprove that such a mechanism as was featured on the blueprint would work and had a prototype constructed. The steam powered mechanism that delivered pressure to the ramp at the front of the boat where the ram that was sealed with tar actually worked and the land ships disembarked with minor trouble. After some revisions the original designer of the contraption was promoted. The ship itself hasn’t seen any combat and only combat testing.
 

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@ImperialEevee hello there

Love the idea <3, and the sub reaches all standards format-wise. However, I would like the history and description sections to be fleshed out more to approve this.

Here are some questions I'd ask if I were a potential buyer of this transport ship: Has this ever been used in combat before? How exactly does the mechanism lower the ramp? How is the lower deck set up with rooms? Maybe adding some names to these engineers? Where would the cannons be?
 
@ImperialEevee hello there

Love the idea <3, and the sub reaches all standards format-wise. However, I would like the history and description sections to be fleshed out more to approve this.

Here are some questions I'd ask if I were a potential buyer of this transport ship: Has this ever been used in combat before? How exactly does the mechanism lower the ramp? How is the lower deck set up with rooms? Maybe adding some names to these engineers? Where would the cannons be?
Fixed it hopefully.
 
@ImperialEevee amazing additions the sub feels much more fleshed out (:

My only feedback is that the very well made explanation of the ramp, which is currently in the history section should probably go into the description section. As it's explaining the functionality and less of a historical point.
 
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