Approved Landechtraum. (Land ship).

[ImperialEevee]

Ship class name: Landechtraum.
Credits: Wikipedia.
Type: land ship.
Purpose: war ship on land.
Architect: Saqualin, royal builder.
General description: The war ship is a two floor vessel on eight wide wood wheels on each side propelled for ward by a steam engine. Pointing out of each side of the ship are eight 24 pounder guns. The wood walls of the ships serve as protection against enemy ground fire and are thick enough to stop musket balls.

**Attributes**
Main Stats

• Defence: average.
  • Defensive Elements: eight 24 pounder guns, wooden walls thick enough to stop musket balls.
• Offense: average.
  • Offensive Elements: eight 24 pounder guns.
• Durability: average. Weaker against cannons.
• Scarcity: (Semi-Unique (Just a handful). Provincial: Sol, Safir, Salir, Sara, Solicia.
• TvM Requirement: 5V1

Strengths
1. mobile cannon emplacement.
2. Juggernaut.
3. Mobile outpost.

Weaknesses
1. Slow moving.
2. weak to light artillery fire, infantry attacks.
3. can run out of fuel.

Historical Information
The ship was created by Saqualin while he was looking out at the docks and though it would be cool to turn it into a land vessel. The first two ever made were the Joyous Sword and the Iron Gutter. The two were deployed as the riots in Sol where the rioters were lured out towards the ships and were filled with canister shot by the land ships. The riots were started by demands for higher wages.

 

[Dreadheart]

@ImperialEevee now this is a fine opening sub ^_^
I will be reviewing this sub on behalf of the mods

Initially, i would like to express my shock realizing this is meant for -land-! NICE.

Now, onward to the bureaucratic part, I noticed few hickups in this i would like addressed:

• Attribute Points. Given my count, if it is Semi-Unique it is 11, otherwise it is 12 points allocated to them. I would request that each attribute has only one option, to avoid confusion, so this can be either Semi-Unique, or Provincial. In either case, according to the table, you are able to allocate up to 8 points in attributes, unless a Consolidation thread follows.
  Spoiler: Point Allocation Chart
  

  Points Spent	Requirements
  4-8	None
  9-12	Consolidation Thread (15+ Posts, 200+ Words Per Post)
  13-16	Consolidation Thread (20+ Posts, 200+ Words Per Post)

• Strengths-Weaknesses: This utter -beast- is something to fear in the battlefield! Now, when it comes to these, it would require 2 or more for each. From the top of my head, based on what you already wrote,
  putting on Strengths
  1) Mobile Cannon Emplacement
  2) Juggernaut, can endure heavy punishment from infantry or light artillery,
  3) Mobile Outpost. Can be used as an outpost, or a small fort, which would require boarding in order to be breached.
  and in Weaknesses:
  1) Slow Moving
  2) Weak against cannonfire
  3) May run out of fuel
  
  That would make it way easier to distinguish pros and cons, and would allow better insight to its use.
• Lastly, regarding the History, this is more of an inquiry rather than an actual remark, is there any further insight on the riots that may perhaps showcase the ship's capabilities? Were there occasions these landships were used ineffectivelly, or was there a learning curve on their use? Adding such insights might spice up the sub
  
  
  
  @ImperialEevee

 

[Dreadheart]

@ImperialEevee
Thats some impressive design! Looking firward seeing it in action!