Ready for Review BP1 Hunter Class. (Heavy Bomber.)

[ImperialEevee]

Name: BP1 Hunter class. (Heavy Bomber.)
Credits: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Bomber, https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/TIE/sa_tactical_bomber,
Consolidation Thread: NA.
Description: This ship is built like a Y-bomber with a Tie fighter design. It has two large Gauser ion engines in the main body connected to two long G1 thruster units with tie-fighter styled fins mounted on the sides. It’s painted a dark gray with two red stripes going down the center.

CLASSIFICATION

• Type: Starfighter.
  • Vessel: Starfighter.
    • Dimensions: Length: Fifty feet. Width: 27 feet. Height: 8 feet.
    • Crew: 2.

ATTRIBUTES

• Durability: average.
• Speed: Average.
• Defensive Capabilities: average.
  • Gear: shield generators, T1 scrambler.
• Offensive Capabilities: very high.
  • Armaments: 3X AP5 Multi-role launchers, seven round magazine. 4X G4 Dauntless frontal ion cannons.
• Scarcity: Common.
  • Manufacturer: Galactic Republic manufacturing group 5.
• Cargo Capacity: NA.
  • NA.

Strengths:
1. Interchangeable payloads.
2. Armor piercing payloads.

Weaknesses:
1. Weak against enemy fighters.
2. Enemy flak, point defense auto-turrets

Historical Information
This vehicle was created as a ship to serve in the Galactic Republic’s imperial fleet. The designer was Agustus Mark, a popular civilian car designer. The original design is rumored to have been drawn a napkin. Early, crude test pilots joked about it being a failed attempt school bus. It is designed to fly in swarms and every part in it can be made from modern vehicles common in the Galactic Republic Empire. Its systems are a closely guarded secret as they largely have been tested in actual combat situations against ground pirate units.

 

[Dreadheart]

@ImperialEevee
"Description: This ship is built like a Y-bomber with a Tie fighter design. It’s has two large Gauser ion engines in the main body connected to two long G1 thruster units with tie-fighter styled fins mounted on the sides. It’s painted a dark gray with two red stripes going down the center. It"


"It" What!?

IT WHAT!??!?!?!

WHAT DID IT "IT"!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!!??!?!?!?

*uncontrollable panic spiral*


2. Strengths/Weaknesses

Strengths:
1. Able to flatten entire cities. doomsday weapon?! I feel this hints to nuclear-level payload, or some extreme property not mentioned. In either case, It is not a strength a bomber may have, especially not, considering it is Very High, and there is also the Extreme Offensive spot xD Id take that bit out entirely.
2. Can penetrate enemy hulls. I would be more comfortable with "Armour-Piercing/Incendiary" loadout instead of "auto penetration".
3. Heavy bombs. I believe the above remark would cover that fully.

Weaknesses:
1. Weak against enemy fighters. NICE! I like this one, very to the point and simple.
2. Enemy cannon barrage. I have a feeling you mean AA artillery like flak. If it isnt artillery but point-defense autoturrets, turbolaser or guided torpedoes, would it still count? If so, I believe a more generic term would be suitable.



3. Historical Info

"This vehicle was created as a ship to serve in the Galactic Republic’s imperial fleet. It’s built to decimate an enemy fleet into oblivion. It’s systems are a closely guarded secret as the they largely have been tested in actual combat situations."
- If its built to decimate fleets, does it mean it is a super-ship? Bombers are meant to deliver painfully heavy load to enemy ships, positions or so, but they are in no way capable of enging, much less killing off, a full element.
- I would like to suggest following things to be addressed:
a. When was this type of bomber invented? Do we know by who? What was the need for such a thing to come up? Is it being used as a solo unit, or are they swarming like WWII B-17 bomber locust, like Galactic Empire's bomber raids usually were like?
b. You mention it has been tested in actual combat. What kind of combat? Do we know any of its records? Any special events?

 

[ImperialEevee]

@ImperialEevee
"Description: This ship is built like a Y-bomber with a Tie fighter design. It’s has two large Gauser ion engines in the main body connected to two long G1 thruster units with tie-fighter styled fins mounted on the sides. It’s painted a dark gray with two red stripes going down the center. It"


"It" What!?

IT WHAT!??!?!?!

WHAT DID IT "IT"!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!!??!?!?!?

*uncontrollable panic spiral*


2. Strengths/Weaknesses

Strengths:
1. Able to flatten entire cities. doomsday weapon?! I feel this hints to nuclear-level payload, or some extreme property not mentioned. In either case, It is not a strength a bomber may have, especially not, considering it is Very High, and there is also the Extreme Offensive spot xD Id take that bit out entirely.
2. Can penetrate enemy hulls. I would be more comfortable with "Armour-Piercing/Incendiary" loadout instead of "auto penetration".
3. Heavy bombs. I believe the above remark would cover that fully.

Weaknesses:
1. Weak against enemy fighters. NICE! I like this one, very to the point and simple.
2. Enemy cannon barrage. I have a feeling you mean AA artillery like flak. If it isnt artillery but point-defense autoturrets, turbolaser or guided torpedoes, would it still count? If so, I believe a more generic term would be suitable.



3. Historical Info

"This vehicle was created as a ship to serve in the Galactic Republic’s imperial fleet. It’s built to decimate an enemy fleet into oblivion. It’s systems are a closely guarded secret as the they largely have been tested in actual combat situations."
- If its built to decimate fleets, does it mean it is a super-ship? Bombers are meant to deliver painfully heavy load to enemy ships, positions or so, but they are in no way capable of enging, much less killing off, a full element.
- I would like to suggest following things to be addressed:
a. When was this type of bomber invented? Do we know by who? What was the need for such a thing to come up? Is it being used as a solo unit, or are they swarming like WWII B-17 bomber locust, like Galactic Empire's bomber raids usually were like?
b. You mention it has been tested in actual combat. What kind of combat? Do we know any of its records? Any special events?

Edited this too.