Under Review Hunter Class. (Cruiser)

[ImperialEevee]

Name: Hunter Class. (Cruiser.)
Credits: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Arquitens-class_command_cruiser.
Consolidation Thread: NA.
Description: Hunter class cruisers are gray, triangular shaped vessels with a bridge built close to the bridge.

CLASSIFICATION

• Type: heavy Cruiser.
• Cruiser.
  • Dimensions: Length: 739 feet. Width: 430 feet. 170 feet.
  • Crew: 150 officers and enlisted crew. 70 gunners. 100 infantry.

ATTRIBUTES

• Durability: Average.
• Speed: high.
• Defensive Capabilities: low.
  
  • Gear: X1 shield generator, heavy reinforced durasteel hull.
• Offensive Capabilities: Average.
  • Armaments: X24 sextuplet turbo laser cannons.
• Scarcity: Common.
  • Manufacturer: HGRE.
• Cargo Capacity: Average.
  • 160 cargo capacity.

Strengths:
1. Easy maneuverability, small turning radius.
2. Average star fighter deployment.

Weaknesses:
1. Larger anti-ship cannons.
2. Smaller on board defensive forces

Historical Information:
This cruiser was built by an engineer forced to be an engineer. Acur Mobir was an odd clone who came out of the pod not fit for active combat service, missing his left arm and having a blind right eye. These two physical features became iconic in the culture and the old, wise mentor characters in old movies can be spotted with two physical disabilities. Despite his physical deformities his intelligence and gift for engineering was high and he was mandatorily made into an engineer which he hated. He liked fixing toilets more and plumbing more. As such he began to mess with projects by adding unnecessary and convoluted plumbing and electrical systems to different things at the last minute. Even when he was in a brig he managed to mess up three more projects though it’s not known how. Eventually he got his way and became a plumber.

 

[Dreadheart]

@ImperialEevee Cruiser time!

vessels with a bridge built close to the bridge.

I would like to ask. 0.o waaaaa? whats bridge close to the bridge? i believe there is some kind of typo here.

• Durability: Average.
• Speed: high.
• Defensive Capabilities: low.
  • Gear: X1 shield generator, heavy reinforced durasteel hull.
• Offensive Capabilities: Average.
  • Armaments: X24 sextuplet turbo laser cannons.
• Scarcity: Common.
  • Manufacturer: HGRE.
• Cargo Capacity: Average.
  • 160 cargo capacity.

I count 15 points out of 12 available? Unless its meant to get a consolidation down the road?

2. Average star fighter deployment.

so. One of the strengths is basically the attribute? I would like to see more flavoured.

Weaknesses:
1. Larger anti-ship cannons.
2. Smaller on board defensive forces

I am slightly confused about the weaknesses. There are weapons like particle cannons and plasma, or flak, which can engage larger ships if done appropriately. I feel, if i understood the weaknesses correctly, they are not as representing as i would expect.

This cruiser was built by an engineer forced to be an engineer. Acur Mobir was an odd clone who came out of the pod not fit for active combat service, missing his left arm and having a blind right eye. These two physical features became iconic in the culture and the old, wise mentor characters in old movies can be spotted with two physical disabilities. Despite his physical deformities his intelligence and gift for engineering was high and he was mandatorily made into an engineer which he hated. He liked fixing toilets more and plumbing more. As such he began to mess with projects by adding unnecessary and convoluted plumbing and electrical systems to different things at the last minute. Even when he was in a brig he managed to mess up three more projects though it’s not known how. Eventually he got his way and became a plumber.

You start with an outright debatably troll sentance. Then, to my shock, you go down to a rather spicy story, which i will not lie, i wanna hear more of, and you go on expositioning a-

wait.

He didnt like engineering, but he loved plumbing 0.o a rather intriguing person with a rather unique taste! And then........ 0.o nothing?

How is this connecting to the ship in -any- way? It feels this is the first out of the 5 paragraphs who lead to the creation of the ship 0.o Which im gonna be honest i dig just by thinking of it xD Gimme that lore you got 4 paragraphs to go!