Ready for Review Queen Elizabeth

[Le Machinal]

VEHICLE/VESSEL TEMPLATE
Name: Queen Elizabeth
Credits: Open AI, https://www.google.com/url?sa=i&url...ved=0CBUQjRxqFwoTCPC5u-SF4o4DFQAAAAAdAAAAABAE edited by @Dreadheart
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Description:



CLASSIFICATION

• Type:
  
  • Vessel: Capital Ship
    • Dimensions: Length: 800 m Beam: 100 m Draught 20.1 m
    • Crew: 1 captain with automated systems and able to slave other ships on it.

ATTRIBUTES

• Durability: Extreme
• Speed: Average
• Defensive Capabilities: Very High
  • Gear (List or describe the defensive elements of the vehicle)
• Offensive Capabilities: High
  • Armaments: (List or describe the defensive elements of the vehicle)
• Scarcity: Unique
  • Manufacturer: (What States, Organizations, or characters produce this vehicle?)
• Cargo Capacity: NA
  • (List the cargo/passengers onboard the vessel/vehicle here)

Strengths
Very Durable
Great Firepower
Can float


Weaknesses
Low rate of fire from main batteries
Bulky and not too maneuverable as other type of ships
Needs escort ships to function at full capacity


Historical Information
The blueprints from where this ship was based off marked a milestone in ship development at a long forgotten planet.

 

[Dreadheart]

@Le Machinal Here I find myself, in a moment of weakness and misguided duty, looking down upon the approval section.

In which we should get to work.

Hello ms Dreadnought.

I would like to write down some prompts and comments regardding above subm to be discussed throughout the process of the review.

1. Credits. Please state the AI which was used to generate the art. Always put credits to the art and media used in the sub, especially if real artist work is used. Also, please backtrack where the original designs of the vessel were sourced, and use them too as a credit.
2. Consolidation Thread field. If the attribute points require no consolidation to be established, please write NA, otherwise the required post count, and in due, when completed, link the actual thread for reference.
3. Attributes will require bit more fleshing out, given relevant weaponry, tech etc not yet linked. Which we may get into in due course.
4. Strenghts/Weaknesses. I would prefer the "Very Durable" bit to be changed to something more technical. Where does her durability originate? "Thick armour, allowing her to endure significant punishment"? "Powerful shield generators, combined with stout design, making her a juggernaut vessel built to endure in the heat of battle"? Such kind of sugar.
5. Float. It floats Freaking finally a ship which can ship. NICE
6. Weaknesses are dope, I see clearly worked mechanics in them! Nice.
7. Historical Information. Now, when it comes to the fluff (description & hist info) it is expected to see at least 2 paragraphs, at least in the hist info bit, which would establish the actual plot around the sub. This is where you can go wild, really. How was she built? Where was she built? Any spicy plots around that? Has she served in any active warzones? Any action she seen? What about her AI? Anything specific about that?
8. Now, regarding the ship's crew... Given it requires only a captain, which i presume may also be a droid, and all the rest operate through AI? Automated, or is there a main control console everything goes through? In case of boarding, how is the vessel expected to defend? Or can she, at all? When receiving damages, can she repair through repair crews, droid mechs, or any other way? Or is she in need to call a shipyard for it?