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Work In Progress Elvasar Harvester Hives

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GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Elvasar
  • Designation: Sentient, Hive-Mind
  • Origins: Elvasar Nebula (to the galactic east side of Akelos System, where Athys is situated)
  • Average Lifespan: Unknown, believed to be around 200-300 years
  • Estimated Population: Scattered. The Elvasar operate in Conclaves, which may number from hundreds all the way up to millions. They are fleet-based society which seeks to collect resources from planets around their Nebula. Why? This is unknown. OOC: Their Hive Mind is decaying due to the nebula's influence and thus, the Elvasar try to perpetually repair and repatch their machines, ships and hive mind, in order to keep it alive. A slow grind to an inevitable end.
  • Description: Tall, thin seemingly skeletal posture with rather humid thin white-transparent skin. They are all cybernetically enhanced with what seems to be their suits, without the ability of extracting them without tearing their internal organs. They have up to 6 long, six-fingered arms and their legs are up to twice their torso size.
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Breathes: They require air of over 75% oxygen in order to breathe without technological enhancement.
  • Average Height of Adults: 3-4 meters tall
  • Average Length of Adults: Rather thin
  • Skin color: Transparent pale
  • Hair color: No hair
  • Distinctions: Strangely long limbs and unbalanced palm anatomy. They may be found having up to six arms, and they all have a very long neck.
  • Races: Elvasar
  • Force Sensitivity: Force Dead
Strengths:
  • Harvester Horde. When moving out of the Elvasar Nebula, they sail in huge hive fleets that number hundreds of vessels and potentially millions of Elvasar troops. This phenomena is known, to the nearby systems, as a Harvester Horde. When such event occurs, several systems are under attack and, if unable to hold back the Harvesters, the Elvasar will take all kinds of resources and living creatures onboard, before returning to the Nebula, leaving only barren wasteland behind them.
  • Fleet-based civilization. Their homeworld is an artificial planet-like behemoth of several conjoined space ships. Due to the nature of the Nebula, sailing through it would cause excess damage to any vessel, which makes the ultimate defeat of this species a matter of time, until their Hive Mind finally collapses.
  • Emotionless. The Elvasar do not share emotions such as empathy, pain, love, or hatred. They operate as a huge host of robot-like behavior, seemingly fully controlled by the Hive Mind. They never show any ensignia or symbol that could identify different factions or sects within their ranks.
Weaknesses:
  • Fragile. After a Harvester Fleet is defeated in battle (which means a large proportion of it is destroyed) then the Elvasar withdraw back to the Nebula where they spend decades of isolation, rebuilding their numbers before they are able to launch another Harvester Horde.
  • Inevitable End. The Elvasar seem to be at the brink of extinction, as the Nebula clearly grinds their technology as well as themselves. It is believed that, should the Elvasar are contained and their harvester fleets constantly defeated, it would take no more than an eon, before their ultimate end. Ofcourse, should several Harvester Fleets return to the Nebula victorious, could signal a whole new threat for the sector...
CULTURE
  • Diet: They liquify a mixture of several resources they gain through raiding neighbouring systems (beginning from ash and rocks, all the way up to whole living creatures, and crystals) which they inject to their bodies. They consume tremendous volumes of water, which makes oceans a primary target. Depriving an Elvasar from water would lead to the body being hardened, eventually killing the alien within days.
  • Communication: There has been no reference of these aliens using spoken language. It is highly speculated they are all operating under the Hive Mind's control, thus communication is not required.
  • Technology level: Their vessels are built with very advanced and complex technology, which is heavily based on physical force. Although they themselves are fully unable to use any form of strength, their sophisticated machines provide the missing muscle, allowing them to process durasteel and develop powerful plasma shields that allow their ships to carry huge wing-like blades, that they use to engage enemy vessels. Cannons and artillery is based almost exclusivelly on crystal-like formations.
  • Religion/Beliefs: NA, hive mind.
  • General behavior: Very hostile towards all possible encounters. They do not seem to share any form of diplomacy or tactic, as oppose to other races. Instead, they base their strategy in sheer force of numbers. By the time a certain proportion of their fleet is destroyed, they retreat to easier targets, or to the very Nebula.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Elvasar Nebula has been off the charts for several eons, indicating that it may be a relativelly new celestial phenomena. Due to the resourceless nature of the Nebula, no interest was ever drawn to it. The populated regions around it seem to have either been well-fortified, or destroyed and repopulated throughout the eons. It is often these Harvester Fleets to aim a single star system, without spreading beyond it, even if the harvest is successful. It is speculated that the Elvasar aliens come from a long lost civilization that engaged high tech, resulting to the very creation of the Nebula. Unable to move the Hive Mind without destroying it cause of the Nebula, the Harvester Hordes were developed in hope of the Hive Mind being so well-fortified that it would survive a journey through of the Nebula. As far as the speculations go, the entire Elvasar race is an artificial product of whatever or whoever is in control of the Hive Mind, as means to gather resources for the fortifications, as well as the maintenance of their nest deep in the Elvasar Cluster. This theory is further supported by the findings of the studied aliens found in battle aftermaths. There is no sign of reproduction organs, or complete dygestion system, which indicates the Elvasar as a race are a product of bioengineering, just like war-droids would be, with their physical needs simply covered by the excess level of technology they sail with. As the eons pass, more and more scientists tend to believe that behind these unnerving alien raiders hides a mad mind, or minds, who were trapped in a turmoil of their own making, resulting to the need for resources.

These alien races have been plaguing Akelos System and the nearby regions with seasonal Harvester Hordes that emerge every several decades. Several worlds of these systems if not entire star systems have been reduced to stone, due to their attacks, although the past three eons most incursions have been defeated, causing the Harvester Hordes to make less and less appearances.
 
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Well seems this is the oldest post and the first one i will be reviewing!!

*deep breaths*
I can do this!


Ok so starting of,I love it the concept its amazing *joy in hive mind* cant wait to see the final product once we done! And the more submissions this will create! :D

Now for some glaring question marks, that need to be ironed out!

So lets deep in this ancient possible bio engineered species!


I couldn't find details of Akelos System nor Athys? Im assuming this will be also done in submissions? If so might i suggest a WIP sub for them and linked for easier reference?

The same goes for the Nebula can't wait to see it!!

A glaring question I have is they live in the nebula but it causes them issues, is there a reason they can't leave the nebula? Id like to see that in more depth since it also ties in their weaknesses, so no issues occur in the future!!

Also their suits what function do they provide? strength breathing help since i saw they need high oxygen % not usually found even in habitable planets where *more humanoid species* inhabit.

I love some species that don't stick to the whole sensitive trope! FORCE DEAD hell yeah!
My question is tho their force dead property is it more like the Yuuzhan Vong where they cant be sensed?
Or more like the
Ysalamiri where they repel the force? Do i dare say something completely else? Go wild! just need the clarification tho!


There seems to be 1 more STR and 1 less Weakness, lets keep them nice and even!

I like the fleet vibe alot, but id like to see some additions to both STR and weaknesses about the species its self individually more biologically speaking! It is a race thread after all!

Fragile. After a Harvester Fleet is defeated in battle (which means a large proportion of it is destroyed) then the Elvasar withdraw back to the Nebula where they spend decades of isolation, rebuilding their numbers before they are able to launch another Harvester Horde.

Is their fleets fragile? them? Its a confusing train of thought! Also id prefer a weakness that doesn't apply once something is defeated but the weakness can lead to defeat!

Inevitable End. The Elvasar seem to be at the brink of extinction, as the Nebula clearly grinds their technology as well as themselves. It is believed that, should the Elvasar are contained and their harvester fleets constantly defeated, it would take no more than an eon, before their ultimate end. Ofcourse, should several Harvester Fleets return to the Nebula victorious, could signal a whole new threat for the sector...
Here would be a fitting space to clarify why the cant leave the nebula its self!


Depriving an Elvasar from water would lead to the body being hardened, eventually killing the alien within days.
May i suggest we turn this into a weakness and expand on it possible?
By expanding how frequently they require water?

Communication: There has been no reference of these aliens using spoken language. It is highly speculated they are all operating under the Hive Mind's control, thus communication is not required.
Do I dare hope this could turn into a STR or a weakness?
Also could the connection to the hive mind be severed somehow?
What would happen to the individual at that moment if such is a case?

Speaking of hive mind! I would like possible a small expansion on it!
Does it have a radius?
Does each member share the consciousness or is there a central point where the hive consciousness exist ?

Also I love the extra details! But sadly Id need you to reformat the sub into the forums structure and format, under the race template!


Well this was a journey wasnt it!
Alot to take in of amazing world building!!
Just letting you know since the thread will be reformatted and the sheer volume of content we might have a small back and forth till we get this approved!


@Dreadheart
 
I couldn't find details of Akelos System nor Athys? Im assuming this will be also done in submissions? If so might i suggest a WIP sub for them and linked for easier reference?

The same goes for the Nebula can't wait to see it!!
you are quite right! I will see to drop some links in there and get some WIPs in order!

A glaring question I have is they live in the nebula but it causes them issues, is there a reason they can't leave the nebula? Id like to see that in more depth since it also ties in their weaknesses, so no issues occur in the future!!
*cracks knuckles* aighty, you want more lore!? Ya gonna get it!

Also their suits what function do they provide? strength breathing help since i saw they need high oxygen % not usually found even in habitable planets where *more humanoid species* inhabit
oxygen and keep them contained from anything. They are fragile like glass and have issues with low humidity.

Or more like the Ysalamiri where they repel the force? Do i dare say something completely else? Go wild! just need the clarification tho!
i remember i had clarified that! Will be added!
Is their fleets fragile? them? Its a confusing train of thought! Also id prefer a weakness that doesn't apply once something is defeated but the weakness can lead to defeat!
the idea is that, if one of their fleets takes casualties, replenishing takes ALOT. So breaking their momentum effectivelly cripples them.
May i suggest we turn this into a weakness and expand on it possible?
will do.

Do I dare hope this could turn into a STR or a weakness?
Also could the connection to the hive mind be severed somehow?
What would happen to the individual at that moment if such is a case?

Speaking of hive mind! I would like possible a small expansion on it!
Does it have a radius?
Does each member share the consciousness or is there a central point where the hive consciousness exist ?
giving me some stuff to think on! Will get to work

Also I love the extra details! But sadly Id need you to reformat the sub into the forums structure and format, under the race template!
yep u got me xD

if it is alright with you, so as not to add to the reviewer's encumbrance, could we turn this to a WIP?
You got me some points that I would like to expand on in depth ^_^
 
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