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For days, the sun had been hidden from them by dark clouds, and heavy downpour with no end in sight plagued the villagers of Mara. It almost felt like the storm was devouring them as fields were flooded, and roofs started leaking. The people of Mara were used to bad weather, but this, a storm...

OUT-OF-CHARACTER INFORMATION Ship Name: The Skewer Credits: Image 1 Type: Seaship Purpose: Skirmisher Ram Boat Consolidation Thread: N/A Architect: Forged by the shipwrights of the Eshkin Clans Description: These so-called boats were designed for agility and boarding power, equipped with heavy...

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Crown Clans Amid the festering multitude of Eshkin Clans, a select few rise high above the endless swarm, ancient, feared, and unrivalled. These are the Crown Clans: paragons of Eshkin cunning and dominance, whose names are whispered with awe and dread in every tunnel and warren. Through...

Exciting ship you got here @James 'Slinger' Antilles I'm not seeing any major issues, except for the 'Offensive Capabilities' being listed as 'N/A'. I understand that in its current configuration, the ship is unarmed. However, given that it has 12 hardpoints which can be outfitted with...

hello there @ImperialEevee I’d like to see both the history and description of the flag expanded further. For example, why were certain colors chosen? What prompted the change from the old dynasty flag to this new design? When is the flag typically raised? Is it considered a symbol of great...

Oh my, now thats a history section done right, tragic yet sooo epic @Dreadheart It looks like the “Description” section was overlooked; simply listing the word “Kathalla” isn’t sufficient. You’ve effectively woven descriptive details into other areas, so a brief summary in the dedicated...

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Greetings @ImperialEevee It appears that the question mark ("?") under the "Type" section was not removed. Additionally, I believe the description of the book could be expanded further, consider including details such as its material, weight, size, and other characteristics to really bring...

Evil guys you got here @Marcus Aumont Before moving forward with approval, I would like to address a few points for clarification and adjustment: You have listed several weaknesses, but I would appreciate a more detailed explanation of weaknesses one, two, and three. Currently, they seem...

The journey had come to an end, yet it was only the first step in a far deeper descent. Beneath the choking sky and the flicker of doom-forged flames, the Warmaster stood motionless, his gaze sweeping over the convoy. His warriors, though worn by the wastes, stood firm. The two outsiders...

The fires still burned. Great pillars of smoke rose into the evening sky, casting the ruins of the dwarven city in hues of rust and blood. The valley stank of char and death, exactly how Ironclaw liked it. He stood on a scorched ledge overlooking the devastation, gauntlet resting on the pommel...

The sky groaned. The dwarven airship, once a vessel of salvation, now a wounded beast, listed violently in the smoke-choked air. Flames licked across its hull, its engines belching sparks and oil. With every passing moment, altitude bled away. Inside, chaos reigned. Screams echoed in the broken...

From the deck of the airship, everything looked like death. The city below was vanishing into flame and ruin, streets swallowed by smoke, towers collapsing like brittle twigs, once-sacred halls blackened to hollow shells. Fires raced along the rooftops, chasing shadows and screams. Then the...