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Crown Clans Amid the festering multitude of Eshkin Clans, a select few rise high above the endless swarm, ancient, feared, and unrivalled. These are the Crown Clans: paragons of Eshkin cunning and dominance, whose names are whispered with awe and dread in every tunnel and warren. Through...

Exciting ship you got here @James 'Slinger' Antilles I'm not seeing any major issues, except for the 'Offensive Capabilities' being listed as 'N/A'. I understand that in its current configuration, the ship is unarmed. However, given that it has 12 hardpoints which can be outfitted with...

hello there @ImperialEevee I’d like to see both the history and description of the flag expanded further. For example, why were certain colors chosen? What prompted the change from the old dynasty flag to this new design? When is the flag typically raised? Is it considered a symbol of great...

Oh my, now thats a history section done right, tragic yet sooo epic @Dreadheart It looks like the “Description” section was overlooked; simply listing the word “Kathalla” isn’t sufficient. You’ve effectively woven descriptive details into other areas, so a brief summary in the dedicated...

Noice, tank go boom boom, @Dreadheart APPROVED

Greetings @ImperialEevee It appears that the question mark ("?") under the "Type" section was not removed. Additionally, I believe the description of the book could be expanded further, consider including details such as its material, weight, size, and other characteristics to really bring...

Evil guys you got here @Marcus Aumont Before moving forward with approval, I would like to address a few points for clarification and adjustment: You have listed several weaknesses, but I would appreciate a more detailed explanation of weaknesses one, two, and three. Currently, they seem...

The journey had come to an end, yet it was only the first step in a far deeper descent. Beneath the choking sky and the flicker of doom-forged flames, the Warmaster stood motionless, his gaze sweeping over the convoy. His warriors, though worn by the wastes, stood firm. The two outsiders...

The fires still burned. Great pillars of smoke rose into the evening sky, casting the ruins of the dwarven city in hues of rust and blood. The valley stank of char and death, exactly how Ironclaw liked it. He stood on a scorched ledge overlooking the devastation, gauntlet resting on the pommel...

The sky groaned. The dwarven airship, once a vessel of salvation, now a wounded beast, listed violently in the smoke-choked air. Flames licked across its hull, its engines belching sparks and oil. With every passing moment, altitude bled away. Inside, chaos reigned. Screams echoed in the broken...

From the deck of the airship, everything looked like death. The city below was vanishing into flame and ruin, streets swallowed by smoke, towers collapsing like brittle twigs, once-sacred halls blackened to hollow shells. Fires raced along the rooftops, chasing shadows and screams. Then the...

A low hum, deeper than thunder, rippled across the valley. The Sturmkanone shuddered on its tracks. Its coils glowed an ugly, pulsating green. Skeerch stood atop a mound of charred earth, frothing at the mouth as he shrieked the final order. “FIRE-FIRE!” The sky split. A bolt of light, not...

Molten stone hissed beneath iron boots. The Sturmkanone's fury had carved a straight line of death through the dwarven city. Smouldering wreckage littered the ground, the air thick with smoke, ash, and the stench of charred stone. It was through this inferno that the last dwarven general stood...

The chanting reached its apex. The Maw encircled the Sturmkanone in perfect formation, thirteen concentric rings of plague-robed zealots, their bodies swaying like reeds in a toxic wind. One by one, they raised their sacrificial knives and plunged them into their own bellies, bleeding out onto...