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Location: Western Borderlands of the Four Summits
The wind here did not howl. It groaned, long, low, and ceaseless. As though the mountains themselves resented the gash torn open in their western flank.
The wasteland beyond was a plain of silent ash, littered with slag-bones of creatures...
@Nepheli N. Tzunidahr, hello again, cool unit you got there. Let's get straight to it, there are a few areas of improvement.
You listed under weaknesses that the Flintlocks are ineffective against modern foes, now considering flintlocks are one of the most modern weapons made right now, I feel...
@Nepheli N. Tzunidahr Greetings, very interesting unit you got here. There are a few adjustments before we can approve this submission.
Mainly, the issue is that your attributes don't reflect the stat you have given them, for example, you listed their armour as Low, but they have brass-plated...
OUT-OF-CHARACTER-INFORMATION
Unit Name: Maschinist
Credits: N/A
Consolidation Thread: N/A
Unit Description: Maschinists are radical tech priests, the only ones who truly understand their doomed inventions, they carry in various hellish engines and weapons, supporting their warlord's campaigns...
@Nepheli N. Tzunidahr Seems like I counted wrong haha, I wonder what triple-barrel weapon comes next xD
Just a small hiccup in your weaknesses section (Complex Internal Mechanics and Maintenance Sensitivity) . This feels like the same weakness, both say that regular maintenance is required and...
OUT-OF-CHARACTER INFORMATION
Name: Radiated Assault Shrapnel Hurler ( R.A.S.H. )
Type: Improvised explosive device
Credits: Your Imagination
Consolidation Thread: N/A
Description: The R.A.S.H. is a compact, land-based explosive used by the Eshkin in trench warfare, chokepoints, and ambush...
OUT-OF-CHARACTER INFORMATION
Name: Radiated Aquatic Threat ( R.A.T. )
Type: Aquatic Mine
Credits: ChatGPT
Consolidation Thread: N/A
Description: The Radiated Aquatic Threat, or R.A.T., is a grotesque underwater mine developed by the Eshkin. Shaped like a bloated mechanical rat head, its...
@Nepheli N. Tzunidahr
Greetings Gunsmith, I believe your sub is still missing a few sections (strengths, weaknesses, history). In addition, if no consolidation thread is in the making, I'm going to need a bit of a point re-adjustment, as you are a few slots too high.
Besides that, this is...
The Rune of Ending awakened. A soundless flash came first, a pulse of searing white that lit every tunnel and hall in Krag-Duraz, banishing shadow for a single, eternal instant. Then came the roar: a deep, ancient thunder that cracked the world like an egg. Stone buckled. Iron screamed. The...
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